Thread:J Fan/@comment-4887268-20120317002619/@comment-1984959-20120322083844

Eh...it looks ok, but a small note(as per corrections made to Orlando's page): The information regarding his birthplace and family doesn't really belong in the intro. It needs its own section in the Biography section. The way the intro summary is set up is the preferable setting of each article about a certain cast or crewmen.

Other than that, you're doing a decent job so far. ;)