Thread:Emily Windsnap/@comment-4898132-20120304140116

Hi Emily,

First and foremost, you're doing a good job with the "Personality and traits" sections(just want to make that part clear before I go on). However I do wish to point out one thing you need to work on. For future reference, please write information in those sections in an "in-universe" perspective(as is pointed out on this page).

Other than that, keep on working! :) 