Thread:Uskok/@comment-2008429-20170518155144/@comment-2008429-20170518160516

I had to rewrite some of the sentences because to retain the information that was in those sentences without the use of comma's, needed new words to bridge the sentence clauses together. How doesn't it fit the rest of the section? The most I redid was put "which was" into a sentence. I don't think that's inconsistent with anything, especially soemthing that minscule. Also, it doesn't change the fact that the use of comma's has beyond overused. You should place a comma in a sentence every single time you think a pause is needed. Just because you would pause slightly if you read the sentence outloud. Doesn't mean you should place a comma there. It's a very very common mistake I've seen on wiki's. Look at this short article on proper comma use. http://www.write.com/writing-guides/general-writing/punctuation/mastering-the-art-of-comma-usage/commas-misuse-of-commas/