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I, along with a few others, have been working to inprove an article called "Jack Sparrow's tricorne." It was flagged for sloppy writing. Work has been done on it since. Can that template be removed yet?

Also, I would like to see said article become a Featured Article in time. I don't believe I can nomanate it, because I'm not a Pirate Lord, but I would still like the article to be considered for the honor when it fits the standerds. I t would be nice to hear some responces allong this point.

One more thing; ideas for new templates have been suggested by several members of the wiki, but, as far as I know, only one (the "quoteless" template,) has been taken sereously. Does the Brethren Court want to use any of the ideas suggested. (If you would like to read the forum, the link is here.)

Is there any feedback on any of these points? - Captain J. Sparrow

Im not sure about the quality of the writing but the layout looks a little sloppy to me, also anyboady can nominate an article although I wouldnt recomend this ive said it looks a little sloppy.--\\Captain KAJ// 22:22, 23 October 2007 (UTC)

Yes, Captain KJA, but the idea is that we (or someone else) can improve the article so it could be a Featured Article. If you would like to read the article for yourself, here's the link. - Captain J. Sparrow

Some things I might suggest is: list of appearances needs to be updated, it needs a list of sources, the image needs to be soured, at least one good image needs to be added to the front of the article, the hats brown not black the paragraphs need to be structured better, and the intro needs to be expanded.--\\Captain KAJ// 23:07, 23 October 2007 (UTC) Thanks, Will do. - Captain J. Sparrow